Paragraph Analysis

In my paragraph analysis for my QRG I focused on the key points to writing and revising paragraphs as described in chapter 4 of Rules for Writers. These points included focusing and developing a main point, and combining coherent and organized points with smooth transitions. This process helped me to understand what my paragraphs were missing and which ones definitely needed revision.

MyNameIsHarry "Revision" 05/14/08 via Flickr, permission granted by author

Overall I learned that my rough draft was just that, rough. My paragraphs all had a main point, but they did not all elaborate well on the point or develop the point in a clear, coherent, and organized manner. All of my evidence could be better explained, especially my quotes, which need to have more context. Overall, I need more substance in each of my paragraphs, and most of that substance needs to include explanation. I also need to work on my transitioning between thoughts and ideas that don't correlate directly.