Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

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Finally. My Draft. It would be an understatement for me to say this project was complex and complicated for me to grasp. Despite the numerous times Mr. Bottai explained that our essay should serve as an explanation of the rhetorical strategies of an example of an argument in our field, it didn't really hit me what we had to do until I was writing the actual essay. Even then... let's just say I referred to the Project 2 Breakdown often.

My draft is rough, obviously, so I know it could use more substance, length, and evidence. I mainly want anyone peer editing to focus on exact points on the rubric that I am missing, so I can gain those points. I also would like feedback on if what I do have is effective enough for our purpose.

Thanks!!!