Here is my final draft of my Project 2. I feel like I did most of my editing to my introduction and conclusion, but I actually don't think that is a bad thing. I learned a lot in this unit of what an introduction can add to a piece, it works as the framework, the foundation for the entirety of the piece. Having a solid introduction allows you something to work off of when writing (or in my case editing) the body paragraphs.
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