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Looking through my paragraphs, it is plain to see that I don't have my main idea incorporated in a way that is clear and makes my piece effective. I also don't have much explanation to my main idea, as I don't incorporate much evidence. These are all things I need to work on revising. My organization and transitions also need to be revisited, now that I can see what ended up working and what just made the paragraphs more confusing.
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